One day I had a Kitten her name was Daisy she was so cosy worm when I was watching a movie.At the start of the move I went to get Daisy from in the laundry she was not in the laundry so i went to look for her outside I found her trying to catch a bird with my sister's kitten kanya.I got her and tock her inside and then watched the movie the lion king. Daisy went to sleep on my ame then she curled into a ball she was so so cute.After the movie Me and Reef played a game with Daisy then she ran away to eat her jelly meat.Daisy was blake and a bit of weight on her tummy and kanya is black and white all over him.after Daisy ran away to eat we went to get Satan is blake and weight on her tummy.
I really like the way you have created a picture for the reader about what you were doing on this day.
ReplyDeleteKittens are so much fun to play with, I wish I had one at home.
I wonder if you could put a space after the full stop next time to make it a little easier to read.
thank you Miss thomason
ReplyDeleteHello there great job and the way you put this is awesome keep up the good job!!!
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ReplyDeleteVery good work Luca. Mabey next time you create a story remember capital letters and puncuation, but very good writing.
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